July 21, 2011
Tiny ankles
Slow motion backwards
Doll-like, meek.
Blond hair dangling
Hunched over in shame.
Belongings sprawled across floor
Back surging with pain.
Eyes momentarily flooding
But look all around.
Nobody make a sound.

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LilaW This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 8:57 pm
This is unique, it makes me think. I like it, good job :)
PointOfNoReturn replied...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 12:10 am
thankyou(: its about an experience while in line at a store. A woman with some kind of disease fell over and it was really scary
PointOfNoReturn replied...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 12:11 am
*fell over onto a wall over merchandice and everything fell over onto her
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