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Felt On.

By , Bombay, India
You were my wish
Upon a star
But you’re not
Who I think you are

I turned my back
I swayed side to side
And before I knew it
You went off to hide

But then I found you
I almost fell to my feet
I hate you
You dirty lying cheat

My heart is now empty
It’s broken in two
I want to go back
To before I met you

I’m moving on now
I don’t need you no more
I can’t take it no more
There’s a reason why
We were not meant to be
But for now just know
This is how I feel.





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Kate Endton said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 1:14 pm

I really love how straight forward your writing is. Please submit more. Your poem made me realize how I'm not the only one going through this. 

Best wishes! Good luck! Hope you get published in the magazinee!!!

 
sjones replied...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 9:00 pm
THANK YOU soo much kate! we actually submitted an image too called "jagger" -- you should check it out. :) i hope we get published as well, thank you for your kind comments!
 
cliff said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 12:34 pm
wow, so much emotion...i feel bad now for my past girlfriends...i really want this to be published so other guys understand what girls have to go through...
 
sjones replied...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 9:02 pm
aww, well hopefully it will!
 
tanya said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 12:29 pm
THIS IS SOO INSPIRING! I TOTALLY UNDERSTAND THE DEPTH OF YOUR POEM, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING!
 
Kate Endton replied...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 1:15 pm
couldn't have said it any better!
 
sjones replied...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 9:03 pm
THANK YOU! 
 
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