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Beyond these plain white walls
is a world I long to see
To be free and run
but they keep me in this place
to rot and waste away
To give me pills and isolate me
When will I be cured, to say,
when can leave this place?




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AliLinn said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 7:48 pm:
Great job, Beautiful! I love you!
 
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immortal1290 said...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 3:19 pm:
Wow, this is really good! I especially liked the last three lines of the poem, because I can relate to feeling "sick", different,  isolated, and alone. Keep writing :)
 
ErinJ replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 5:34 pm :
Thanks alot! It's nice to know you can relate, not that I hope you feel that way just that, well I cant explain but hopefully you know what I mean... :)
 
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