The Pain Revealing Angel

July 20, 2011
Your there I know it. I can feel your chilling breath on the back of my neck. I’m still. Non moving. Knowing the damage has been done
Help me
This is all I think as my vision becomes blacked out. I screamed out for help. But know one came.
Help me.
But it is to late. By the time someone comes there will be no one to save.
Help me.
The damage is done. Know it is to late. Your there I know it. I can feel you. But know I welcome you as for in away you were the only one that came to save me. I am no longer scared.
Take me.
Is the last thing I whisper as you descend upon me and carry me away from my pain.





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musicispassion said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 11:49 pm
creept pic that goes with it beautiful poem i never thought of an angel taking me away keep up the great work
 
hanging_girl_666 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 5:17 pm

Take me.
Is the last thing I whisper as you descend upon me and carry me away from my pain

 

I Love it!!! My favorite one of yours other than A Twisted Prayer.

 
OliviaR. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 10:01 am
Wow!! You aer extremely talented!!!
 
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