The Pain Revealing Angel

July 20, 2011
By pill.happy.adventure PLATINUM, Manchester, New Hampshire
pill.happy.adventure PLATINUM, Manchester, New Hampshire
21 articles 3 photos 41 comments

Your there I know it. I can feel your chilling breath on the back of my neck. I’m still. Non moving. Knowing the damage has been done
Help me
This is all I think as my vision becomes blacked out. I screamed out for help. But know one came.
Help me.
But it is to late. By the time someone comes there will be no one to save.
Help me.
The damage is done. Know it is to late. Your there I know it. I can feel you. But know I welcome you as for in away you were the only one that came to save me. I am no longer scared.
Take me.
Is the last thing I whisper as you descend upon me and carry me away from my pain.



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on Aug. 31 2011 at 10:01 am
Black_Veil_Bridesmaid GOLD, Frisco, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Sui.icide is not cowardly. What is cowardly is making somebody hurt so much they want to kill themselves." Ashley Purdy
"Money can't buy happiness, but it can buy bacon, and thats pretty much the same thing." Andy Biersack
"Your not alone" Andy B

Wow!! You aer extremely talented!!!

on Aug. 5 2011 at 11:49 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

creept pic that goes with it beautiful poem i never thought of an angel taking me away keep up the great work

on Jul. 23 2011 at 5:17 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

Take me.
Is the last thing I whisper as you descend upon me and carry me away from my pain

 

I Love it!!! My favorite one of yours other than A Twisted Prayer.



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