Tonuge Tied

July 20, 2011
By pill.happy.adventure PLATINUM, Manchester, New Hampshire
pill.happy.adventure PLATINUM, Manchester, New Hampshire
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Mixed signals flowing left and right
You keep all your feeling locked up tight
My confusion is now running high
wondering if anything will happen between you and I?
Your heart has nothing that can be seen
Now as always I am left wondering what it all means
But it’s time for us to come clean
I need to know how things between us are going to be

This could be our last first kiss
maybe just another hit and miss
The time has come, so tell me now,
Will you let me ease your pain,
Or will you throw us away in vain?


The author's comments:
This is just a little poem about mixed signals and thoughts and how sometimes its hard to but your thoughts into words. Hope you like it!

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on Oct. 17 2011 at 2:46 pm
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

Very well written, and I think something everyone can relate to, it reminded me of some times like that in my life, great job!

ams98 said...
on Sep. 2 2011 at 10:19 am
ams98, Brighton, Michigan
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I LOVE THIS!! U have a gift at writing...keep writing....great job....

ANDDDD....

I LOVE UR NAME....athena....thats awesome


on Aug. 5 2011 at 11:45 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

u r a brilliant poet good job i like the pic u chose to go with it

on Aug. 5 2011 at 8:06 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~
~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~
~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than
a distant memory.~

You are marvelous at poetry. Your words flow so nicely and easily. Keep it up !

on Jul. 27 2011 at 8:23 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

I like this a lot! It is very easy to relate to, and the flow is pretty smooth :)  Love the lines "This could be our last first kiss/ Maybe just another hit and miss" Very clever :) Keep writing!

on Jul. 23 2011 at 5:13 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

Now as always I am left wondering what it all means
But it’s time for us to come clean
I need to know how things between us are going to be

Very pretty. I like it.


gigi01 GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 11:52 am
gigi01 GOLD, Seffner, Florida
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I like the part about the "first last kiss."

 


gigi01 GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 11:51 am
gigi01 GOLD, Seffner, Florida
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very relatable... Good job! 


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