Tonuge Tied

July 20, 2011
Mixed signals flowing left and right
You keep all your feeling locked up tight
My confusion is now running high
wondering if anything will happen between you and I?
Your heart has nothing that can be seen
Now as always I am left wondering what it all means
But it’s time for us to come clean
I need to know how things between us are going to be

This could be our last first kiss
maybe just another hit and miss
The time has come, so tell me now,
Will you let me ease your pain,
Or will you throw us away in vain?





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RayBaytheDinosaur said...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 2:46 pm
Very well written, and I think something everyone can relate to, it reminded me of some times like that in my life, great job!
 
ams98 said...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 10:19 am

I LOVE THIS!! U have a gift at writing...keep writing....great job....

ANDDDD....

I LOVE UR NAME....athena....thats awesome

 
musicispassion said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 11:45 pm
u r a brilliant poet good job i like the pic u chose to go with it
 
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 8:06 pm
You are marvelous at poetry. Your words flow so nicely and easily. Keep it up !
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 8:23 am
I like this a lot! It is very easy to relate to, and the flow is pretty smooth :)  Love the lines "This could be our last first kiss/ Maybe just another hit and miss" Very clever :) Keep writing!
 
hanging_girl_666 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 5:13 pm

Now as always I am left wondering what it all means
But it’s time for us to come clean
I need to know how things between us are going to be

Very pretty. I like it.

 
gigi01 said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 11:51 am
very relatable... Good job! 
 
gigi01 replied...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 11:52 am

I like the part about the "first last kiss."

 

 
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