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I wish someone
would read my mind
So I didnt have to
explain!
Call me lazy.
Call me desparate.
But , you dont know how it feels
- to have an entire ocean to share
-but only be able to-
share a single drop of it.
So, please someone!
READ MY MIND!
So I wouldnt have to drown
- in all these swirling thoughts.




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Jappyalldayeveryday said...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 7:58 pm:
I like this :) And your comment about the article haha
 
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Maria M. said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 11:34 am:
Talk about breathtaking... And so insightful as well. Right there with you, totally understand what you're saying. Please keep writing, you're obviously talented. Have a nice day & God Bless! :)
 
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JerseyGirl716 said...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 9:42 pm:
I love this SO much! Great job, love the metaphor. 5/5!
 
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Raytheraym said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:05 am:
Wow, great job!
 
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redhairCatThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 4:08 pm:
Very well written. 
 
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ZildjianThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 12:31 am:
I hear you
 
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musicispassion said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 11:56 pm:
this is great i like the pic u chose to go with it i like how u compared it to drowing good metaphor
 
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