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I cupped the world
in my hands,
as if it was a corpulent
red apple, and took a bite.

Its core dripped knowledge.
The placenta of earth.
I chased it with the universe,
and felt it settle in my swollen belly.

I urged humanity to have a taste;
I begged, pleaded, and cajoled.
Until the only things left of the planet
were full stomachs and open minds.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Natasha1994 said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 1:28 pm

love it

 

 
BitterSweet1993 said...
Mar. 18, 2011 at 8:05 am
Sounds like the world has much more to offer than what most see on the surface. Beautiful metaphors by the way.
 
Darby said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 1:22 pm
there was so many great metephores
 
Barokien This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 5:31 pm
I really like the apple-earth metaphor. I feel like it connects to the apple-knowledge association. Also, like Cheyenne said, a new take, which is really nice. However, I feel like the last two stanzas are a little disconnected from the other two.
 
Cheyenne D. said...
Jun. 27, 2009 at 5:38 am
It was unusual which made me like it even more.
It showed emotion and opened my mind.

Keep writing!
 
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