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A Petunia for your heart, my love
A Lilly for your mind
I would give my soul, my love
If you would just be mine

A gem for your beauty, dear
A crystal for your strength
I would give most anything
To put me in your ranks

A kiss for your thoughts, darling
A hug for your words
I would send the moon to you
To make me less absurd

The stars for your eyes, my love
The river for your soul
I would give most anything
To feel a true love’s toll



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FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Aug. 21, 2011 at 2:13 am:
Great poem. It really seems like you would give up anything for love!
 
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whitstar27 said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 2:59 pm:
I just loved the way it sounded. It's hard to explain, but I really liked it.
 
Megan.J.B replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 3:38 pm :
Thank you so much :) I'm glad that you appreciated & enjoyed it!
 
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leafyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 2:21 pm:
lol i have to agree, this is cute. but good. keep up the nice work!
 
Megan.J.B replied...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 12:18 am :
thank you so much ;)
 
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d.l.breaux said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 3:03 pm:

This is so cute!

If you weren't trying to be cute, I'm sorry, love is always cute :)

 
Megan.J.B replied...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 12:17 am :
Haha, indeed love is cute! Thanks for the comment :)
 
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. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 2:42 pm:
I LOVE this. The rhythm is nice and just a generally great poem. Keep it up!
 
Alice_C replied...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 11:56 pm :
its so sweet I wish boys around me could talk this way
 
Alice_C replied...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 11:56 pm :
Can you check out some of my work and comment on it
 
Megan.J.B replied...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 12:17 am :
I certainly could check out some of your work and I'm glad you liked it! :) If you could maybe check out some of my other work that would be great as well. 
 
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