Beauty is Skin Deep.

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You're a Gem of a Kind
A heart of gold on your sleeve
Which bleeds not red
But blue
Because you are a different soul
Soul of silver in your hand
Sterling
Never Fading, or turning colors
Hopes of Diamond in your heart
You hold them with such a conviction
No one can detour you
No one would dare to try
Even when things turn awry
You hold fast to your dreams
Beauty is only skin deep
But YOU'RE beautiful where it counts





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Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 5:01 pm
i love this! its really sweet and i like the choice of words you used aswel, good job! :)
 
.Izzy. said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 3:10 pm
This is beautiful, especially the last two lines(:
 
julian This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 10:57 am
You really sustain the poetic mood throughout the entire piece, which is wonderful! You use a wonderful amount of poetic devices like metaphors to enhance the poem as well. Beautiful!
 
ohheyyyelli said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 10:32 am
I reallyreally love this! Keep writing, lovely[:
 
Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 4:27 am
Last line, the best!!! Overall, this poem shines!!!
 
ArtsDefinition replied...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 7:02 am
Thank you =)
 
thetruthawaits94 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 12:17 am
I love this poem. truly. so cute, so imaginative. Good Job!
 
ArtsDefinition replied...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 12:22 am
thank youu
 
Lion Eyes said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 8:29 pm
thats a really good poem.. i like it! =)
 
ArtsDefinition replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 11:45 pm
thank you kindly!
 
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