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Those Little things that ruin your day,








In every single how and way _









I missed a game, I ruined my hair,









I can’t locate my underwearre.










I lost a bet, I killed a mouse,



My dog tracked mud around the




house.








I tipped a chair, I spilled my milk,



I ripped my brand new robe




Of silk.




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ohheyyyelli said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 12:17 am:

This is so light, it's one of those pick-me-up poems.

Really great flow as flow, the rhymes felt natural, not forced. Really enjoyed it (:

 
ohheyyyelli replied...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 12:17 am :
flow as well*
 
Cubster replied...
Nov. 17, 2011 at 4:32 pm :
Thank You! I wrote this a while ago and I didn't think anyone would read it. I really appreciate that.
 
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