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May 5, 2011
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Those Little things that ruin your day,

In every single how and way _

I missed a game, I ruined my hair,

I can’t locate my underwearre.

I lost a bet, I killed a mouse,

My dog tracked mud around the


I tipped a chair, I spilled my milk,

I ripped my brand new robe

Of silk.

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ohheyyyelli said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 12:17 am

This is so light, it's one of those pick-me-up poems.

Really great flow as flow, the rhymes felt natural, not forced. Really enjoyed it (:

ohheyyyelli replied...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 12:17 am
flow as well*
Cubster replied...
Nov. 17, 2011 at 4:32 pm
Thank You! I wrote this a while ago and I didn't think anyone would read it. I really appreciate that.
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