In Need of Repair

June 22, 2011
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Your uncontrolled temper,
drilled a hole into my head.
Your outrageous words,
are in my nightmare I’ve described and said,
has changed me but not phased me,
I probably should have told you instead.
But I think that maybe,
You really should fix that hole in my head.

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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 9:20 pm
awesome captain. i am loving the rhyming scheme and the last line. it would be conducive for you to do our dance at the time which is now
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