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Ghost

Music is a ghost
traveling in search
of someone
to listen to it

Music is a mystery
waiting
for a detective
to solve it
can we?

Music is a black hole
sucking you in
so you can explore
it's depths

Music is a dream
not deffered
but nourished
by those who love it
We're musics mother

Music is an army
marching into your heart
a war

Music is an adventure
you never know where
it'll take you
Jamaica, India, Mexico
anywhere

Music is me
growing and becoming stronger
each day
always changing

Music is a recipe
each ingrident added
with love and care
never exactly perfect

Music is wind
rustling the lush trees
hoping someone
will feel it

Music is a pair of pants
worn differently
by each person
and generation

Music is a wizard
casting a spell on you
captivating you
by it's magic

Music is a shield
blocking the bad times
but healing them to

Music is a spy
watching you
waiting
waiting to bomb you
out pours
joy,love,hate

Music is a playground
peaks of glory
lows of sadness
falls that make tears
joyful slides
constant rhymes




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_Zavery_This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 8, 2012 at 3:00 pm:
This is beautiful, love the unique metaphors!...Or similies? I dont know xD
 
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AriShineThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 30, 2012 at 11:59 am:
I love this so much! I can tell that you have a real passion for music, and that is a passion that I understand. Beautiful. Keep writing!
 
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_Zavery_This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 1:45 pm:
I love this, the article took me by surprise. Awesome work! Five stars!
 
musicispassion replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 2:15 pm :
thanks why did it take u by surprise?
 
_Zavery_This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 8:49 pm :
I thought this had something to do with horror, but it was more about music, and so passionate!   =D
 
musicispassion replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 11:45 pm :
o ya sorry there was a mistake and i typed in the wrong title it's suppoesed to be music 3 music 1 and 2 i have posted also sorry :P
 
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Ha-5-rika said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 10:50 am:
OMG Iam in love with this poem.
 
musicispassion replied...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 2:22 pm :
thanks r u a music person!! :P
 
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ttlove21 said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 1:02 am:
love your music poems they keep getting better music is half of me i cant live without it ... its my happy place
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 11:06 pm :
music keeps me going i would go into a depression without  thanks do u play any instruments?
 
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Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 3:05 am:
it's depth - its depth
musics - music's
it's magic - its magic


I like the metaphors you used. It just makes music something more than adjectives do. :)
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 2:44 pm :
thanks r u a music person?
 
Alon_Freevoice replied...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 3:59 am :
very, very much :)
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 1:31 pm :
do u play any instruments?
 
Alon_Freevoice replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 3:35 am :
I taught myself how to play the piano. :) And I love it.
 
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CarrieAnn13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:10 pm:

I like the whole metaphor of the poem.  You really like music, don't you? ;)

My only criticism is that you spelled 'deferred' wrong.

 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:13 pm :
yes i do it'a passion if u try to take it away from me be prepared to fight with a force to be reckoned with thanks and sorry about the spelling :P
 
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Delictious said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 10:18 pm:
I love the metaphoric stlye, like you did with imagination! VERY WELL DONE(:
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 11:40 pm :
thanks my strongest poems are metaphors and onomotopoetic and minutes in time
 
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redhairCatThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 4:10 pm:
Wow - this poem is wonderful! You did an excellent job!
 
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