July 1, 2011
I look happy
cry everyday

I talk loud
fear my thoughts

I feel loved
am alone

I love you
know you love her

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NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 4:06 pm
I think you could maybe use some imagery and metaphors to spice it up a bit, but it's a good concept :)
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