Facade

July 1, 2011
By JustEmily PLATINUM, Cicero, Indiana
JustEmily PLATINUM, Cicero, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
That's HAWT!


I look happy
cry everyday

I talk loud
fear my thoughts

I feel loved
am alone

I love you
know you love her



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on Jul. 14 2011 at 4:06 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.
~Some random person on the Internet :P

I think you could maybe use some imagery and metaphors to spice it up a bit, but it's a good concept :)


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