No One Understands.

July 12, 2011
It's strange how I'd rather read and write?

No one understands.

Rather them going out,

I rather stay in?

No one understands.

It feels as if sometimes I'm all alone;
By myself

No one understands.

I can't express myself too the world

No one understands.

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NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 12:46 pm
Ah, I've felt like this many a time; I know how you feel. Good job decribing it, but I think you could use more adjctives to spice it up a bit.
HaleyDRog. replied...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 9:13 pm

I liked this but I think it says No one understands too many times. Maybe you could delete a couple of those. Other than that it had a really good message. I think everyone feels like that in their own way, you know?

Great Job!

AllysonMarie replied...
Mar. 4, 2012 at 11:52 am

This was just one of thoes Late night writing poems! ^.^ But thanks.!


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