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Poison

Lying is a poison,
floating in the air.
It settles in our veins,
and corrupts everything.
It is a plague,
and everyone's diseased.



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leafyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 7:22 pm
you really pack the meaning in your words! i love this poem, its really true. keep up the nice work!
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 8:47 pm
Thank you!
 
ams98 said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 7:59 pm
I LOVE IT!! Great job:)))
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 9:20 pm
Thanks! :)
 
WiseGirl said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 7:18 pm
I love it! Very good!
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 9:20 pm
Thank you!
 
ohheyyyelli said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 10:29 am
I like the meaning, and how it's short but sends the message.  You're a talented writer[:
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 2:55 pm
Thank you very much!
 
HopelessOctopus said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 6:54 am
I really love this. So very true :)
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 2:55 pm
Thank you!
 
Alon_Freevoice said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:36 am
Short but very meaningful. I like poems like this. Yours too :)))
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:40 am
Thanks! :)
 
thetruthawaits94 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 11:39 pm
I like this a lot! It is VERY true, indeed. We all catch it sometime or another! :)
 
Raytheraym replied...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 11:46 pm
Thank you! :)
 
TwasBrilling said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 9:22 am
So. True. You captured that well.
 
Raytheraym replied...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 11:46 pm
Thank you!
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 5:10 pm
Yep - very true!
 
Sencere said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 10:20 am
That is so true
 
hanging_girl_666This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 11:09 pm
I absolutely love it.
 
Raytheraym replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 12:38 am
Thank you!
 
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