July 12, 2011
By Aspenator BRONZE, Marseilles, Illinois
Aspenator BRONZE, Marseilles, Illinois
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Stranded in this mind of mine,

No way for me to fall,

Rooms without windows, doors, or lights,

But a single mirror on the wall.

Take me to the place you said,

Lead me down the road,

To the place with the undergrowth,

Show me where to go.

Lead me to the ever after,

Where I'm meant to be,

Take me from the corridor

Of broken hearts and dreams.

Tried and true, and torn apart,

My heart keeps pushing on,

Searching for the love I lost,

The time for me is done.

The author's comments:
I'm misunderstood, but i never lose sight of myself. I may not be loved by everyone, but I'm loved by someone, somewhere.

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on Jul. 15 2011 at 7:15 am
emanmkhan SILVER, Austin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
\"People will forget what you said. People will forget what you did. But people will never forget how you made them feel.\" Maya Angelou

This is beautiful! The transitions among the stanzas flow smoothly. This is a job well done :)

on Jul. 14 2011 at 9:19 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.
~Some random person on the Internet :P

This flows perfectly! Great job! Check out my work?


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