Why Do I Love You?

June 25, 2011
By kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
24 articles 4 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.


I don't know why I love you
And I don't know why I care
You made me so blue
You're leaving me cry in the land of nowhere
You told me you liked me for me
You played with my emotions
And now I finally see
You caused a big commotion
My hearts been broken one to many times
All I can say to you is I'm done trying
We communicate like mimes
You just left me there crying
I feel like you don't understand
I can see through your lies
Everything is always on your command
I remember all the times I got lost in those pretty eyes
I thought you could be the one
But you showed me I was wrong
You make me want to take a gun
So I leave you with this song


The author's comments:
I wrote this piece from the heart. I put all my feelings in a poem. I hope you enjoy it and can relate to it. Please rate and comment!

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on Aug. 5 2011 at 9:28 pm
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
24 articles 4 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

Thank you (: and sure.

on Jul. 14 2011 at 12:20 am
ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all."

I can really relate! Good job!

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