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Falling to the ground faster! the impact will be no pain. The hit will be a memory. The day will be the first. The time will be my Faith. The air would be a breath away. My soul would be pulled away from me! The me ,who I lived will be gone before you can say Sorry or Goodbye

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Victoria9This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 1:35 pm:

Thnaks For The Advice Thatt would come in handy..!!



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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 6:46 am:

I like it, but I think you started to go a little bit off of scheme around the end. The context was great and I also loved the theory behind it.

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