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Gills

July 9, 2011
By Aerophonophiliac SILVER, Cedar, Minnesota
Aerophonophiliac SILVER, Cedar, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
“I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.”


A torturous ritual
perpetuated only
by those it eases

Begins with
A broken child
staring at
forever-blank pages

She is a dolphin
being forced
to grow gills

The answers jumble, blur
as saltwater frustration
flows freely

If only to be
a fish
Like the others
what they wanted

Rubbery, useless skin
has never served her
nor lungs requiring
pure oxygen

Quietly, she raises her head
the other children are working
no one is watching
Slowly, she raises her pencil

And carves herself
gills

The author's comments:
This began as a commentary on standardized testing, but, I think, grew much more inclusive as I wrote it. Some of us are born fish... other dolphins. It is our differences that make us worth knowing. But not all of us learn that lesson until it is too late.

I know this is well-covered topic, but I really wanted to try my hand at it.

As always, comments/critiques accepted happily!

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