My Promise to Evan

July 6, 2011
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I love you more than life.
I can’t say what I would do
if something stopped life for you.
If the cause was at your own hands
I would be frozen with guilt for what I couldn’t
make you believe.
I’m shouting this to you now,
so I don’t regret what I didn’t do.
You are the best thing in my world.
You make me laugh.
You open me up to “new” music.
You have such a bright string of lights.
I can’t lose you over
an eclipse of the sun.
we made a promise
swear on our lives.
That I won’t be burying you at
the next sunrise.

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softballbabe2014 said...
Feb. 14, 2012 at 11:29 am
I relate to this! tottally(:
TheWrittenMe said...
Feb. 13, 2012 at 4:51 pm
This was really good. It was very well written. I felt love but for some reason I also felt loss. I loved it.
Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 3:41 pm
i really like it, its sad but its written really well! great job! :)
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