Surfing The Dream

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The waves
Were perfectly blue
With dots of
Surfers Across them
The reason why
Was the forty foot
Waves

I paddled out
To try them
The reef was The
Only problem

The waves ate
The surfers Along
With the bone crushing
Reef

I Duck under
a Wave And
Noticed No life
Had been moved from
Swirls of the waves

Then the perfect
Wave came
I paddled




paddled

Then I stood
I glided across
The wave
Yes it was great

Then the wave
Came down




down

One me

It shoved me into
The reef
Bam

My ribs felt
Like they were
Going to explode

I got sucked under
Unable to breath
I Hit my
Head on the reef

Then it was complete

Dark

Dark



Dark

Then i woke up
It was just a dream

I got up to go surf
Narrative poem
Chris was 13
He loved to
Scooter

Even though
He wasn't
The best

Yesterday
He tried to
Barspin off a
Curb

He hit his
Teeth on the
Bars

The noise sounded
Very painful
It sounded like
A branch snapping

He got up
With a funny expression
Chris was also
Holding His
Two

Teeth That had just
Popped out
Like the cork
To a bottle

The best part was
He wasnt even
Bleeding Because

The teeth came out
as fast as a jet
His face was still
In an upturned and

Puzzled expression
He looked like
He had eating
Forty sour patch kids

He darted into
His garage with
Enough speed

To go through the door
He yelled louder
Than ever and came out

A calm as possible
"That didn't hurt at all"
Then we all just laughed

At Chris


Chris was 13
He loved to
Scooter

Even though
He wasn't
The best

Yesterday
He tried to
Barspin off a
Curb

He hit his
Teeth on the
Bars

The noise sounded
Very painful
It sounded like
A branch snapping

He got up
With a funny expression
Chris was also
Holding His
Two

Teeth That had just
Popped out
Like the cork
To a bottle

The best part was
He wasnt even
Bleeding Because

The teeth came out
as fast as a jet
His face was still
In an upturned and

Puzzled expression
He looked like
He had eating
Forty sour patch kids

He darted into
His garage with
Enough speed

To go through the door
He yelled louder
Than ever and came out

A calm as possible
"That didn't hurt at all"
Then we all just laughed

At Chris

Ode
Ode to the Ocean

The Ocean

So Clear and

Blue, Blue

Like the sky

Its Waves

Are also perfectly

Clear and blue

They wash up

The Sand

Then go back

Back into the

Blue Ocean

Its beaches

Hold only a

Portion

Even though it

Is much

Larger with

much more Clear

Blue













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