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Teeth Brushing

A mini dishwasher inside my mouth
Scrub, scrub, scrub
My mouth is alive

Little teeth are saucers
Silently awaiting the rinse cycle
Rumble, Gurgle, Bubble
Sounds of the dishwasher
SPLAT!

Furious bouts of water come
drowning the small dishes
The dishwasher fights to complete its mission
Swish, swish, swash, swish
SPLAT!

The cycle is over
and the saucers are shining
The dishwasher celebrates by shutting down for the night
Only to be started up again
in the morning



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Delictious said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 12:30 pm:
I like the : SPLAT!
Hahaha, very nice(:
 
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RFrocker23 said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 12:02 pm:
This is really different! I like all the different sounds you incorporated.
 
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PaRaNoRmAl627 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 4:07 pm:
aww! this is adorablee :)
 
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thetruthishere94 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 10, 2011 at 6:30 pm:
This is funny and cute! Good Job!
 
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