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I Left My Mark

June 30, 2011
By LifeWrite PLATINUM, Westfield, New Jersey
LifeWrite PLATINUM, Westfield, New Jersey
44 articles 14 photos 53 comments

Where I once
stood in the garden,
but tomorrow,
after the rain
has passed through,
my footprints
will be gone,
and the memory of me
with them.



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on Aug. 21 2011 at 11:27 am
LifeWrite PLATINUM, Westfield, New Jersey
44 articles 14 photos 53 comments
Miss Hodges! :D Oh my goodness it made my day that you commented on my poem! Thanks so much! Also sorry I didn't personally say goodbye to you on the last day of school--I was a complete mess and everything was kind of a blur.

missehodges said...
on Aug. 21 2011 at 8:36 am
Hi Corrinne!  I really love the simplicity of this poem.  There is something enchanting about it.