Forever

June 27, 2011
By Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it." -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)

"Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want." -b_gomez114


I'm tired of that feeling.
The feeling that I'm losing you.
Forever.
Slowly we're growing apart,
like a flower.
At first it's a bud,
petals close together.
And then it blooms,
and they part.
Can't fight it.
But we can.
We're not gonna bloom.
We'll be that one flower that
never leaves its bud.
Still living,
and growing,
but together.
Forever.



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on Aug. 17 2011 at 7:16 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it." -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)

"Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want." -b_gomez114

Thank you so much!:D I wrote this for my best friend and i definatly feel this way and he has mentioned that he does too but I never got up the nerve to show him the poem...... :/

on Aug. 16 2011 at 7:37 pm
aspiringdreamer SILVER, Carlsbad, California
7 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars."

I agree, this simile was absolutely perfect. I hope you keep writing; you are so talented and I love all of your poems! :)

on Jul. 25 2011 at 8:29 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it." -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)

"Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want." -b_gomez114

Thanks!:) This is one of my favorites! :)

Emily.L GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 1:49 pm
Emily.L GOLD, Gilbert, Arizona
10 articles 12 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes, we just have to be happy with what people can offer us. Even if it's not what we want, at least it's something. " -Sarah Dessen

Wow. That was the best simile ever. Such a good poem...


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