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I'm tired of that feeling.
The feeling that I'm losing you.
Forever.
Slowly we're growing apart,
like a flower.
At first it's a bud,
petals close together.
And then it blooms,
and they part.
Can't fight it.
But we can.
We're not gonna bloom.
We'll be that one flower that
never leaves its bud.
Still living,
and growing,
but together.
Forever.





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Emily.L said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 1:49 pm
Wow. That was the best simile ever. Such a good poem...
 
Reader101This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 8:29 am
Thanks!:) This is one of my favorites! :)
 
aspiringdreamer replied...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 7:37 pm
I agree, this simile was absolutely perfect. I hope you keep writing; you are so talented and I love all of your poems! :)
 
Reader101This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 7:16 am
Thank you so much!:D I wrote this for my best friend and i definatly feel this way and he has mentioned that he does too but I never got up the nerve to show him the poem...... :/
 
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