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Or Love Me Not

Love me,
or love me not,
I don't know what's going on,
and you're just sitting there,
looking back at me,
with pity in your eyes.




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Rissa02 said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 8:18 pm:
"you're just sitting there, looking back at me, with pity in your eyes" Best lines! I love the emotion radiating from this.
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 8:30 pm :
Thank you!
 
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Alon_Freevoice said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:40 am:
I hate it when someone pities me. It makes me feel weak. But I would like it if they would show action with it :)
 
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ritabelle511 said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 12:42 pm:
Pity can be one of the worst things someone can give you, especially in regards to relationships.  I can imagine this in my mind- again, I love the simplicity!
 
Raytheraym replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 6:31 pm :
Thanks! :D
 
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