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have you seen the girl over there,
the one that doesn't seem to care
she's hiding something away
smothering the pain
take one look in her eyes
your looking into the window of her soul
you might be surprised, when you realize
the hidden secret, what lies beneath,
something so deep,,
a broken heart, a ever bleeding scar
untruthful lies, haunted memories
hidden so deep, its hard to believe
on the outside she puts on an act
never wanting the world to know
ashamed of her life at home
she seemed like you and me
but just you wait and see



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Poetryfaces This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 11, 2011 at 9:14 pm:
I enjoyed the suddleniss of the ryming. I love the line "ever bleeding scar". I think that you could of added more imagry like this to convey more of the picture. But over all great poem :)
 
renni replied...
Sept. 12, 2011 at 7:23 pm :
thank you :D 
 
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