her soul

June 23, 2011
By renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes, that girl who seems so strong, who never lets what people say bother her, who smiles and laughs with her friends all the time, is really the girl who, deep down, is falling to pieces.


have you seen the girl over there,
the one that doesn't seem to care
she's hiding something away
smothering the pain
take one look in her eyes
your looking into the window of her soul
you might be surprised, when you realize
the hidden secret, what lies beneath,
something so deep,,
a broken heart, a ever bleeding scar
untruthful lies, haunted memories
hidden so deep, its hard to believe
on the outside she puts on an act
never wanting the world to know
ashamed of her life at home
she seemed like you and me
but just you wait and see


The author's comments:
you don't know everything about a person, even if you think they've told you everything

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renni SILVER said...
on Sep. 12 2011 at 7:23 pm
renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes, that girl who seems so strong, who never lets what people say bother her, who smiles and laughs with her friends all the time, is really the girl who, deep down, is falling to pieces.

thank you :D 

on Sep. 11 2011 at 9:14 pm
Poetryfaces SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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I enjoyed the suddleniss of the ryming. I love the line "ever bleeding scar". I think that you could of added more imagry like this to convey more of the picture. But over all great poem :)


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