No One

May 30, 2011
By kidmick98 GOLD, Gulliver, Michigan
kidmick98 GOLD, Gulliver, Michigan
16 articles 4 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will act as if I do make a difference. -- William James


No one understands
In this dreaded world

No one quite gets me
In this dreaded world

Can anyone hear me
Can anyone hear me?

When I say
My life is terrible

Who even cares
That I feel that way?

Who even bothers
To listen to me sobbing

No
One

No
One

No One
(That’s who I am)



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on Aug. 17 2012 at 3:50 pm
pandagirl312 GOLD, Leawood, Kansas
19 articles 1 photo 92 comments
I think this could use a bit more substance to it, you know? Maybe the idea is that you want it to be vague and open to interpretation, but I think you should add a bit more description. Good start. :)

on Aug. 18 2011 at 10:35 am
LauraMeghan BRONZE, Salem, New Hampshire
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love this!! :)


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