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I lay in wake;
Day and night.
Thoughts drifting...
Lifting...
Sifting through the endlessness.
My thoughts are my dreams.
My dreams never my thoughts.
I sleep in wake;
I will never fully rest.
Fear of dreams becoming nightmares.
Only thoughts.
Only thoughts...
Only...thoughts...
Only thoughts of dreams.
Dreams of thoughts.




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Risible said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 7:46 pm:
I really like this. I can connect to the topic and I love how you float through the poem. I don't know if the pros would like it, but it's fun to read and conveys a sort of disconnected emotion that is awesome. Check out some of my poems, I like your writing, so I'd love your feedback! 
 
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angelicanXdreamer said...
Oct. 2, 2011 at 3:21 pm:

The dreamy way you used the punctuation was very moving. Almost as if literally my subconscious was taking me away...

It felt like this poem could breathe. 

 

 
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EnigmaticBeingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 28, 2011 at 12:41 am:
This poem is okay but its really redundant. You also used a lot of periods. It kind of takes aways from it I think. Overall this needs some work.
 
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