Imperfect

June 2, 2011
By Whitehouse503 SILVER, North Waterboro, Maine
Whitehouse503 SILVER, North Waterboro, Maine
7 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the end you should always do the right thing, even if it's hard."


What's the best thing to forever
When there's nothing left?
What's the point of living
When you have nothing to live for?
Where does life go
When your living a lie?
What happens
When you die?
Where's the laughter
When there's tears?
Where's the heartfelt
When we're living in times of heartbreak?
When is the lie that people are living going to end?
This world isn't perfect,
It's as imperfect as we.

The author's comments:
I just whipped this together, hope everybody likes it.....

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on Apr. 21 2013 at 3:38 pm
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
24 articles 7 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Here is a small fact: You are going to die." ~The Book Thief
"You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self." ~Mikey Pasterik

questions, questions. i like it. it makes you think. good job.

on Mar. 27 2013 at 3:51 pm
KayliLovesYou PLATINUM, Lincoln, Nebraska
25 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont cry because it is over smile because it happened

I love it good work

on Mar. 22 2013 at 5:46 pm
PrincessClaire BRONZE, Fayetteville, North Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
don't do me do your hair

That is so beautiful! And it's PERFECT!!

on Mar. 13 2013 at 6:10 pm
Whitehouse503 SILVER, North Waterboro, Maine
7 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the end you should always do the right thing, even if it's hard."

thanks BFFL :D  

on Mar. 13 2013 at 6:09 pm
Whitehouse503 SILVER, North Waterboro, Maine
7 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the end you should always do the right thing, even if it's hard."

don't cry :o but thanks :)

on Mar. 13 2013 at 6:08 pm
Whitehouse503 SILVER, North Waterboro, Maine
7 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the end you should always do the right thing, even if it's hard."

thanks so much :)

on Mar. 13 2013 at 3:01 pm
thegreatmorry BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 18 comments
;) awww livvy <3 love it!

on Mar. 7 2013 at 3:42 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

wow i about cried i love it

Jake957 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 7 2013 at 12:23 pm
Jake957 BRONZE, Mobile, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live like you're gonna die tomorrow

This is really good!! I like it :)

Mckay ELITE said...
on Mar. 6 2013 at 2:51 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

AMEN! TESTIFY! All I can say is that this captivates what life really is in a concise and unfortunately heart-breaking manner.

on Feb. 24 2013 at 10:17 am
Sabeen_Yameen SILVER, Karachi, Other
9 articles 10 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you want something you have never had,
You have got to do something, You have never done!

Loved it! :)

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 17 2012 at 9:42 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

That was an awesome poem. Great message and great format. I really liked your end. When you said we are imperfect as we. Great line. Suggestion: maybe add some imagery.

on Feb. 4 2012 at 4:37 pm
Whitehouse503 SILVER, North Waterboro, Maine
7 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the end you should always do the right thing, even if it's hard."

Thank you!

on Feb. 3 2012 at 5:40 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

Nice job!! I like the message it gives =) 5/5


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