Breathless

The world sizzles
It’s automatic fast
Alone but not
Empty but not
I give myself over
Surrender to the feeling
Another world is entered
A new me is created
I bask in the sunshine
Now it is all over
All I can say is “wow”





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Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 7:15 am
i like it! short and simple but at the same time very meaningful! its really nicely written aswel, good job! :) 
 
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