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Too Far Down

June 11, 2011
By Tinkerbell13 SILVER, Gaston, Indiana
Tinkerbell13 SILVER, Gaston, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"God, if I can't have what I want. Let me want what I have."


Feels like I'm drowning.
Being pushed under water,
struggling to breathe.
I am afraid.
Afraid of failing.
Afraid of disappointing.
Disappointing you.
When my face reaches
the surface of the water.
I gasp for air.
Only to find myself
being pushed back down.
I try to fnd my way
back to the surface.
Back where I can
breathe.
But I have been
pushed down too far.
My clothing is caught on
a piece of coral.
I can not find my way
back to th surface.
I guess under water
is where society
wants me to stay.

The author's comments:
under water is kind of like a metaphor to me for being excluded. Not everyone has been excluded from something..but the people who have understand how it feels.

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