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Unwanted

May 31, 2011
By allybymyself SILVER, Fullerton, California
allybymyself SILVER, Fullerton, California
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Favorite Quote:
And miles to go before I sleep- Robert Frost


Missing you is an
Unwanted remembrance

Hating you is an
Inevitable emotion

Crying over you is
Only done in secret

Loving you is an
Unwanted emotion

Just like losing you
is an unwanted, unwarranted, unexplained fact



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leafy said...
on Sep. 6 2011 at 5:54 pm
leafy, City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion. 
Ernest Hemingway: I hate it. 
Gil: You haven't even read it yet. 
Ernest Hemingway: If it's bad, I'll hate it. If it's good, then I'll be envious and hate it even more. You don't want the opinion of another writer. 

I agree with smartiechic, you could tell this is from true, raw emotion. Nice job!

on Jul. 28 2011 at 3:05 am
followingnofootsteps SILVER, Orange, California
6 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To avoid criticism, do nothing, say nothing, be nothing."

One could tell that this stemmed from raw emotion. Good piece. :)