Breaking Silence

June 9, 2011
By liveincolor GOLD, Gainesville, Florida
liveincolor GOLD, Gainesville, Florida
17 articles 3 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
You need to be the change you wish to see in the world. ~Ghandi


i am talking to you
you are all gone
i can hear a steady beat inside my head
the blood pumping in a rhythm through my mind
over and over again
like an invisible source of powerful energy
hidden somewhere far too hard to find
or like an unexpected corruption
the thought of something murking in the darkness
unknown and barely there
but you can feel it
it's haunting breath surrounding you
filling you with silent horror
silent fright
like a shadow of something that isn't there
or a voice breaking the boundaries of perfect silence
Screams like crashing glass
tearing apart that peaceful fright
your glad.
through the icy sweat beads on your forehead
you're relieved because you feel
you are no longer utterly alone
it's presence made a show
and something else is with you
through thick, sticky darkness
icy cold sin
it's burning presence seems to barely warm the air
you wrap yourself in the thought
of human warmth
of human love
although most likely
it's just an illusion
and you are probably still utterly alone
frozen yet undead
waiting
waiting
waiting
for something to once again shatter
the silence


The author's comments:
I don't even know why i wrote it.

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Joshua. GOLD said...
on Mar. 14 2012 at 5:27 pm
Joshua. GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"So we shall let the reader answer this question for himself: Who is the happier man, he who has braved the storm of life and lived, or he who has stayed securely on shore and merely existed?" - Hunter S Tompson

Really great!

JMThe-one GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 7:49 pm
JMThe-one GOLD, Enfield, Connecticut
11 articles 10 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy, like art... It has no survival value; rather it is one of those things that give value to survival.
C. S. Lewis

Just where the place their priorities, what their values are, their morals, if they have any, the way they treat others, especially the way we show no trust and are supposed to worry about ourselves first. It's like we're more afraid of eachother than we are other things, and we don't even know it. 

on Aug. 24 2011 at 7:44 pm
liveincolor GOLD, Gainesville, Florida
17 articles 3 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
You need to be the change you wish to see in the world. ~Ghandi

in general i guess, i was reding your "about the contributor" info. i hope u don't mind.

JMThe-one GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 7:42 pm
JMThe-one GOLD, Enfield, Connecticut
11 articles 10 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy, like art... It has no survival value; rather it is one of those things that give value to survival.
C. S. Lewis

Which one? 

on Aug. 24 2011 at 7:41 pm
liveincolor GOLD, Gainesville, Florida
17 articles 3 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
You need to be the change you wish to see in the world. ~Ghandi

hey i have a question, what do u mean when u say u have a problem with the way ppl are?

JMThe-one GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 7:31 pm
JMThe-one GOLD, Enfield, Connecticut
11 articles 10 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy, like art... It has no survival value; rather it is one of those things that give value to survival.
C. S. Lewis

Have you looked at any of my other stuff?

JMThe-one GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 7:26 pm
JMThe-one GOLD, Enfield, Connecticut
11 articles 10 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy, like art... It has no survival value; rather it is one of those things that give value to survival.
C. S. Lewis

Yup. lol. 

on Aug. 24 2011 at 7:26 pm
liveincolor GOLD, Gainesville, Florida
17 articles 3 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
You need to be the change you wish to see in the world. ~Ghandi

You were depressed?

JMThe-one GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 7:25 pm
JMThe-one GOLD, Enfield, Connecticut
11 articles 10 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy, like art... It has no survival value; rather it is one of those things that give value to survival.
C. S. Lewis

Yeah. I wrote all my stuff when I was depressed. 

JMThe-one GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 7:20 pm
JMThe-one GOLD, Enfield, Connecticut
11 articles 10 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy, like art... It has no survival value; rather it is one of those things that give value to survival.
C. S. Lewis

I don't mean to be intrusive, but are you depressed? 

on Aug. 24 2011 at 7:18 pm
liveincolor GOLD, Gainesville, Florida
17 articles 3 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
You need to be the change you wish to see in the world. ~Ghandi

it's the most recent one

JMThe-one GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 7:17 pm
JMThe-one GOLD, Enfield, Connecticut
11 articles 10 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy, like art... It has no survival value; rather it is one of those things that give value to survival.
C. S. Lewis

Best one you have. 


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