June 24, 2011
Losing yourself while
obsessively thinking about your heart and
very warm and happy feelings; you
excessively wonder, breathe, and smile.

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Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 7:04 pm
i like it, it kept me thinking at the end :)
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 8:35 pm
Thank you!
ritabelle511This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 12:45 pm
Even though its only four lines long, this poem made me think! I like that :)
Raytheraym replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 6:29 pm
Thank you!
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