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Melissa

Miraculously
examining the world through
layers of
intense
stigma;
surely it’s
alright.

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corallee This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 11:52 pm:
Usually acrostic poems are very, sorry to say, boring, "halloween" acrostics, and especially name acrostics. However, this was absolutely insane. I loved it--it had a very nice flow, and I feel like I know your friend through just those few lines. 
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 12:48 pm :
Thank you!
 
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betweenyouandiThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 7:07 pm:
Very thoughtful!
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 12:47 pm :
Thank you!
 
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Eirias said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 12:09 pm:
Did you want it to be EXACTLY 100 characters, or is there like a 100 character minimum?
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 12:28 pm :
It's the minimum.
 
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Alon_Freevoice said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:48 am:
Is it this? You rant about 100 characters minimum for this poem, right? Anyway, kudos to you. :)
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:50 am :
Yep! This is it!
 
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redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 5:05 pm:
Hey, that's neat that it's only 100 characters!
 
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ritabelle511 said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 12:44 pm:
Wow....100 characters long and it worked! Good job :)
 
Raytheraym replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 6:30 pm :
Thanks! :)
 
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