The November Rain

May 15, 2011
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The music of rain
Takes me back to my
Nostalgic memories lane

The drops of rain
Makes me remember
When a drop of tear-


of my love
Fall on my face
When I, lying on her lap

And me getting startled
Looked at her face which was wet
With tears, Only then i realized
For what she was crying......

The only last day, the only last hour,
And the only last moment,
We could spent together.......
And never again time would take me
Back to her, or these seasons, neither these winds......

And the days that are waiting ahead
will make me stuck forever
Not letting me go back to my life..



I woke up from my thoughts
When again a drop fell right
On my cheeks, And i looked her,
She smiling in her tears
For not to make me sad....


And i hugged her and weeped
In my heart...stood there for long,
Wishing to be like that forever
Like the hour stuck forever....


And again in this November rain
I am looking back to my past
Wishing that this barrier
Would break, make me free
To fly away to her
To be together forever....!!!





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frndshp bech said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 10:26 am
u jus r0ck di i lyk it 



jus go forward i m alwyaz wid yew 
 
irene said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 5:49 am
heart touching...gr8
 
Anish said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 5:44 am
Good work sis.. Keep it up.. Nice lines
 
Vyshnav said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 2:30 am
Yo super!!!! awesme Keeep it up!!!
 
messi said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 2:09 am
good!keep it up
 
nolee12693 said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 1:56 am
Beautiful! Great job!
 
Alan said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 1:53 am
Whoa! Awesome!!
 
Anandzzz said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 1:41 am
Wow beautiful poem.. wid gud ideas!!
 
Prathyu said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 1:38 am
Wow..!!! Thatz beautiful dear...!!!
 
Reji Dev said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 1:35 am
superb wrk......yaar!!! post mor of this kind.....
 
Gayathry said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 1:28 am
wesome dear...keep it up...!!!
 
Jithin said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 1:25 am
" ohh ... really mindblowing one !!! keep it up !! <3 "
 
NaBeeL_dgafuuuuk said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 1:16 am
reallyy awesumm yaaarr !!! :)
 
rebel said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 4:36 am
gr8 yar.... so touching.. felt reading smthing like a walk to remember dat kinda feel was dere...
 
Arya said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 3:02 am
superb dear............. 
 
sunshine said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 2:56 am
good wrk dearr... keep writing...!! :)
 
sancia replied...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 2:58 am

thank u!!

 

 
sancia said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 2:54 am
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