Drip drop drip drop

May 26, 2011
By Tayrodactyl PLATINUM, Palmyra, Indiana
Tayrodactyl PLATINUM, Palmyra, Indiana
20 articles 1 photo 62 comments

Drip drop drip drop
That’s my life
Drip drop drip drop
Insignificant
Drip drop drip drop
Dull
Drip drop drip drop
Unchanging
Drip drop drip drop
Until it finally stops
Drip drop drip drop
Someday I’ll fix my leaky faucet
Drip drop drip drop
At least, that’s what I tell myself.



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on Jul. 14 2011 at 1:57 pm
Tayrodactyl PLATINUM, Palmyra, Indiana
20 articles 1 photo 62 comments
Thanks you guys I really appreciate the feed back :)

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 3:14 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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I love your poem! Sometimes I feel the same way. And like Little-Irish-Girl said: I fixed it myself. :D  and sometimes it leak again but I'm glad I know how to just fix it and move on. 5/5 stars.

on Jun. 27 2011 at 12:01 pm
Little-Irish-Girl SILVER, Muskego, Wisconsin
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I like it because it reminds me of myself when I used to sometimes cry myself to sleep and then what was wrong got fixed but you added a little humor at the end which made was like making it all better

on Jun. 26 2011 at 7:19 pm
Kat4ever333 GOLD, Orange, California
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Favorite Quote:
I make dark things beautiful and beautiful things dark!
-Kerli I.L.U

its deffinently different but i love it

on Jun. 26 2011 at 3:32 pm
-daydreamer- SILVER, Smyrna, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"Carpe.... Carpe diem. Seize the day, boys. Make your lives extraordinary." ---Robin Williams, "Dead Poets Society"

I like this, it's different.

EmiLund BRONZE said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 11:46 pm
EmiLund BRONZE, Solvang, California
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Favorite Quote:
"since the thing perhaps is
to eat flowers and not to be afraid"
— E.E. Cummings (E.E. Cummings: Complete Poems 1904-1962)

wicked.


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