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Drip drop drip drop

Drip drop drip drop
That’s my life
Drip drop drip drop
Insignificant
Drip drop drip drop
Dull
Drip drop drip drop
Unchanging
Drip drop drip drop
Until it finally stops
Drip drop drip drop
Someday I’ll fix my leaky faucet
Drip drop drip drop
At least, that’s what I tell myself.



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Tayrodactyl said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 1:57 pm:
Thanks you guys I really appreciate the feed back :)
 
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Anagam said...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 3:14 pm:
I love your poem! Sometimes I feel the same way. And like Little-Irish-Girl said: I fixed it myself. :D  and sometimes it leak again but I'm glad I know how to just fix it and move on. 5/5 stars.
 
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Little-Irish-Girl said...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 12:01 pm:
I like it because it reminds me of myself when I used to sometimes cry myself to sleep and then what was wrong got fixed but you added a little humor at the end which made was like making it all better
 
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Kat4ever333 said...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 7:19 pm:
its deffinently different but i love it
 
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-daydreamer- said...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 3:32 pm:
I like this, it's different.
 
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Emilie L. said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 11:46 pm:
wicked.
 
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