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Broken Smile

May 16, 2011
By lifeloveyou1919 PLATINUM, Northfield, New Jersey
lifeloveyou1919 PLATINUM, Northfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
" Live, love, forget, bull , I'm gonna make the day you met me the day you regret."
-Julia Vain


I try to be happy but
my smile isn't there just a great big frown
you broke me and made me weak
to bad I loved you more than anything


The author's comments:
I was no longer happy and the sound broke through

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on Jun. 19 2011 at 2:25 pm
lifeloveyou1919 PLATINUM, Northfield, New Jersey
24 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Live, love, forget, bull , I'm gonna make the day you met me the day you regret."
-Julia Vain

Thanks so much, It means alot.

on Jun. 19 2011 at 10:42 am
crazychick SILVER, Norwich, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Have you ever confused a dream with life? Or stolen something when you have the cash? Have you ever been blue? Or thought your train moving while sitting still? Maybe I was just crazy. Maybe it was the 60's. Or maybe I was just a girl... interrupted

I really liked the raw simplicity of this poem. Very beautiful