Pretender

May 16, 2011
By Delilah_Black GOLD, Cedar Hill, Texas
Delilah_Black GOLD, Cedar Hill, Texas
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She smiles like nothings wrong,
Laugh like it doesn't hurt,
And lives like nothing happened.
If only she knew better...



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on Jun. 17 2011 at 11:13 pm
Roseyalia SILVER, Don&#39t Need To Know, California
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Favorite Quote:
Take my love, take my land, take me where I cannot stand. I don't care, I'm still free, you can't take the sky from me. Take me out to the black. Tell 'em I ain't coming back. Burn the land and boil the sea, but you can't take the sky from me.

I can appreciate and connect to the message in this poem, but it's very short.  I think if you elaborated on it a little more, it could be a lot better.




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