what if life?

May 3, 2011
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Live as much as you can.
Be happy for what you have.
Die when death calls for you,
Even if it doesn’t make sense.
Life is to live,
Death is to die.
It’s going to happen someday,
Let’s just live while you can.

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BreeZephyr This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 13, 2015 at 10:41 am
This was a cute little poem and my favorite of your work so far. Short and sweet. The only thing I wasn't sure about it was if you meant "Let's just live while WE can" instead of "while you can". But the message is still a good one. Not enough people live for the moment and what they have.
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Apr. 13, 2013 at 8:19 pm
I agree, though to be honest - i think think death is just the dramatic gateway to a new and more permanent life.... People need to live instead of trying to prevent death, i think this poem expresses that well!!     ps. please check out my work???? thanks =D
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Apr. 13, 2013 at 8:20 pm
sorry, i didn't realize i wasnt logged in, my username's shahiro
necci said...
Mar. 28, 2013 at 9:57 am
smart message to share
Silver2black said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 5:13 am
I like this poem, the massage IS the best, good share !
Vesperstar1 said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 1:11 pm
I loved this, it's so inspirering
iamthebest replied...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 12:21 pm
Thanx. I really appreciate it
KaylaMarie1996 replied...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 12:58 pm
This is good! Like Vensperstar1 said it is verry inspiring, it's short and to the point. I liked it a lot! :)
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