Life is...

May 2, 2011
Life is 
A journey left to be dreamed
Life is 
A dream yet to be lived
Life is
A memory left to be told
Life is
A word yet to be said
A life is
A world left unknown





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Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 3:54 pm
thanks everybody so much! i really appreciate all the feedback! :)
 
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 7:19 pm

Short , sweet and right to the point.

 

 

Amazing.

 
Garnet77 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 6:38 am
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. 
 
baller4eva This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 3:32 pm
i liked how short and sweet it was. :)
 
blitsnik said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 8:11 am
Now this one was definitly worth five stars. without a doubt. i loved it though i havnt really seen a lot of poems set up like that. You have such a passion for life, it is truly amazing.
 
ohmakemeover This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 5:21 pm
I love the format!  And I always like how you have such a passion for life, as seen in your other poems.  Keep on living life to the fullest!
 
Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 2:07 pm
thanks everyone :)
 
Vicky11 said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 6:51 am
Simplicity is often the most touching, loved it :-)
 
musicispassion said...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 1:55 pm
i love this poem it's great i agree gigi01 i also agree with ur poem keep writing
 
gigi01 said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 10:41 pm
I LOVE the last line... it perfectly ends a beautiful poem!
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 7:18 pm
Wow - you explained it perfectly! Great poem!
 
Emily.L said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 10:40 pm

Life is...

truly explained in this poem. Amazing <3

 
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