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Caught in that frozen moment.
What shall I do?
I'm desperate for you.
I need you.. I love you
Please, please,
Don't leave me.



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xxcoleyxox said...
Jun. 14, 2011 at 4:39 pm:
I love the poem. Although it is short, it is deep and you can really put yourself in the situation. Don't leave me. Almost every reader can relate to this. When you read the first line, the poem could go in many different directions. I love the way you wrote this poem, so short but strong.
 
abby7 replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 1:06 pm :
thanks im glad u liked it :)
 
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PennyM.L said...
Jun. 14, 2011 at 3:16 am:
Aw this is really good, i love it. i really felt it, my fave type of poetry. :)
 
abby7 replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 1:08 pm :
thanks :) im glad i like it! :)
 
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Ladylikeinquisition145 said...
Jun. 14, 2011 at 2:22 am:
I think the simplicity really captures the emotion. But i am curious as to what idea you are trying to get across. I feel slightly lost. But overall, the passion resonates.
 
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ohcaptainmycaptain said...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 12:42 pm:
I like it! It's the dilemma so many of us face.
 
abby7 replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 1:15 pm :
im glad you like it and i no , we all shouldnt have to tho..:/
 
ohcaptainmycaptain replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 2:15 pm :
I agree we shouldn't have to. I love your work though. You should check out some of mine
 
abby7 replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 2:28 pm :
thanks i i surely will!!!
 
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Ella22 said...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 7:15 am:
Well done:)
 
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arimas said...
Jun. 12, 2011 at 9:30 pm:
Whats the point of lots of words when you can get so much emotion across in these few? Beautiful!
 
abby7 replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 1:15 pm :
thanks sooo much!!!
 
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WickedStarcatcher said...
Jun. 12, 2011 at 12:45 pm:
Short, simple and to the point! Conveys so much emotion well saying so little. Luv it! :D
 
abby7 replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 1:09 pm :
thanks im glad you like it :D
 
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Cassys said...
Jun. 12, 2011 at 12:15 pm:

thats soo cute

 

 
abby7 replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 1:13 pm :
    thanks :p
 
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AndySixxLover said...
Jun. 11, 2011 at 6:35 pm:
Its wonderful I love it its short and simple and discribes exactly what im feeling
 
abby7 replied...
Jun. 11, 2011 at 11:28 pm :
Thank you  i know how u feel ...and i love Andy Sixx too! haha
 
AndySixxLover replied...
Jun. 12, 2011 at 7:10 pm :
Isnt he just the se,xy..est guy youve ever seen??? and the best singer!!
 
abby7 replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 1:07 pm :
agreed fully wit both statments! :)
 
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