Don't Leave

May 10, 2011
By abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"If lifes not what you dream, in the end its better than you expected" - my cousin Josie Hannah Gray


Caught in that frozen moment.
What shall I do?
I'm desperate for you.
I need you.. I love you
Please, please,
Don't leave me.



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abby7 SILVER said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 2:28 pm
abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
7 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If lifes not what you dream, in the end its better than you expected" - my cousin Josie Hannah Gray

thanks i i surely will!!!

on Jul. 12 2011 at 2:15 pm
ohcaptainmycaptain PLATINUM, Lumberton, New Jersey
20 articles 6 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
“We, the unwilling,led by the unknowing,are doing the impossible for the ungrateful. We have done so much,for so long,with so little,we are now qualified to do anything with nothing.”

I agree we shouldn't have to. I love your work though. You should check out some of mine

abby7 SILVER said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 1:15 pm
abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
7 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If lifes not what you dream, in the end its better than you expected" - my cousin Josie Hannah Gray

thanks sooo much!!!

abby7 SILVER said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 1:15 pm
abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
7 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If lifes not what you dream, in the end its better than you expected" - my cousin Josie Hannah Gray

im glad you like it and i no , we all shouldnt have to tho..:/

abby7 SILVER said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 1:13 pm
abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
7 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If lifes not what you dream, in the end its better than you expected" - my cousin Josie Hannah Gray

    thanks :p

abby7 SILVER said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 1:09 pm
abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
7 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If lifes not what you dream, in the end its better than you expected" - my cousin Josie Hannah Gray

thanks im glad you like it :D

abby7 SILVER said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 1:08 pm
abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
7 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If lifes not what you dream, in the end its better than you expected" - my cousin Josie Hannah Gray

thanks :) im glad i like it! :)

abby7 SILVER said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 1:07 pm
abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
7 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If lifes not what you dream, in the end its better than you expected" - my cousin Josie Hannah Gray

agreed fully wit both statments! :)

abby7 SILVER said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 1:06 pm
abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
7 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If lifes not what you dream, in the end its better than you expected" - my cousin Josie Hannah Gray

thanks im glad u liked it :)

on Jun. 14 2011 at 4:39 pm
xxcoleyxox BRONZE, Wilmington, Massachusetts
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I love the poem. Although it is short, it is deep and you can really put yourself in the situation. Don't leave me. Almost every reader can relate to this. When you read the first line, the poem could go in many different directions. I love the way you wrote this poem, so short but strong.

on Jun. 14 2011 at 3:16 am
PennyM.L SILVER, Lynwood, California
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Aw this is really good, i love it. i really felt it, my fave type of poetry. :)

on Jun. 14 2011 at 2:22 am
Ladylikeinquisition145 GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angelheaded hipsters burning for the ancient heavenly connection to the starry dynamo in the machinery of night... Moloch whose eyes are a thousand blind windows!...Moloch who frightened me out of my natural ecstasy!" -Howl Allen Ginsberg

I think the simplicity really captures the emotion. But i am curious as to what idea you are trying to get across. I feel slightly lost. But overall, the passion resonates.

on Jun. 13 2011 at 12:42 pm
ohcaptainmycaptain PLATINUM, Lumberton, New Jersey
20 articles 6 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
“We, the unwilling,led by the unknowing,are doing the impossible for the ungrateful. We have done so much,for so long,with so little,we are now qualified to do anything with nothing.”

I like it! It's the dilemma so many of us face.

MT143 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 7:15 am
MT143 BRONZE, Turner, Maine
3 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
I love you once, I love you still, I always have, I always will

Well done:)

arimas SILVER said...
on Jun. 12 2011 at 9:30 pm
arimas SILVER, Columbia, South Carolina
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Whats the point of lots of words when you can get so much emotion across in these few? Beautiful!

on Jun. 12 2011 at 7:10 pm
AndySixxLover GOLD, Weatherford, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
These violent delights have violent ends and in there triumph die like fire and powder in witch their kiss consume

Isnt he just the se,xy..est guy youve ever seen??? and the best singer!!

on Jun. 12 2011 at 12:45 pm
WickedStarcatcher DIAMOND, Massapequa, New York
67 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I don't damsel well. Distress, I can do. Damseling? Not so much."
— James Patterson
"This is the very first page, not where the storyline ends, my thoughts will echo your name until I see you again..." ~Taylor Swift "Enchanted"

Short, simple and to the point! Conveys so much emotion well saying so little. Luv it! :D

Cassys BRONZE said...
on Jun. 12 2011 at 12:15 pm
Cassys BRONZE, Brockton, Massachusetts
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
God gave his only begotten son that whom ever beeves should not perish bet live eternal life Jhon3:16

thats soo cute

 


abby7 SILVER said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 11:28 pm
abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
7 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If lifes not what you dream, in the end its better than you expected" - my cousin Josie Hannah Gray

really wow thanks :)

abby7 SILVER said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 11:28 pm
abby7 SILVER, Bardwell, Kentucky
7 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If lifes not what you dream, in the end its better than you expected" - my cousin Josie Hannah Gray

Thank you  i know how u feel ...and i love Andy Sixx too! haha




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