Don't Leave

I love the poem. Although it is short, it is deep and you can really put yourself in the situation. Don't leave me. Almost every reader can relate to this. When you read the first line, the poem could go in many different directions. I love the way you wrote this poem, so short but strong.

Aw this is really good, i love it. i really felt it, my fave type of poetry. :)

I think the simplicity really captures the emotion. But i am curious as to what idea you are trying to get across. I feel slightly lost. But overall, the passion resonates.

I like it! It's the dilemma so many of us face.

Well done:)

Whats the point of lots of words when you can get so much emotion across in these few? Beautiful!

Short, simple and to the point! Conveys so much emotion well saying so little. Luv it! :D

thats soo cute

 

Its wonderful I love it its short and simple and discribes exactly what im feeling