Siren

May 7, 2011
By whitstar27 GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
whitstar27 GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life gives you lemons, make grape juice. Then step back and let the world wonder how you did it
and
when life gives you lemon, throw them back at life


She may look pretty
Her voice may be divine
But you have no idea what she is inside
Don’t go to her because you won’t come back fine

Her voice is a reel
And you are the fish
You’re her next meal
Be careful! She’s going to lure you in

Close your ears
She’s just a Siren
She doesn’t love you
She never will
She just wants to hurt you
To play with your heart
To manipulate you
Those are her intentions
Right from the start
If a real women is what you want
Well, hey boy, I’m right here


The author's comments:
I thought about all the times guys I liked chose girls that don't really care about them over people who can actually like them. I hope that people will make better choices about who they like.

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on Jul. 18 2011 at 5:41 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

Yes, I love the comparison in this! It's amazing how you did this! :)

.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 1:12 pm
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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I love how you compared those girls to a siren! My favorite part is the stanza about the fish, and I also like the last few lines. Good job!

on Jul. 17 2011 at 10:01 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

This is great!  I never understood why guys fall for girls like that.

on Jul. 17 2011 at 7:46 pm
Delictious GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
16 articles 5 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would like to be remembered as a woman who did the best she could with the talent she had."

Very nice! And I've certainly been there before... I especially liked the part about the fish :
Her voice is a reel
And you are the fish
You’re her next meal
Be careful! She’s going to lure you in

 

I thought that was really fresh and clever! 


on Jul. 17 2011 at 6:38 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
1 article 1 photo 250 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

Wow. That was great. I like he last line , lol, :) . 


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