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I stay silent as the night
as i stand still under this beautiful moonlit sky,
soaking in the serenity of the world around me.
i hear the murmer of the breeze
which brings with it the cool and calmness to the,
tired souls after the days chaos.

But i stand still,
my eyes fixed at a point in the
vast endless sky.
a storm is raging somewhere,
despite the calmness of the night
that haunts me tonight.

The storm is raging within me
but i refuse to speak of it,
so does my body....

But still she comes to me
and holds me in a loving embrace
"it's going to be alright son'
dont worry....it will", she says.

I look at her astounded, as she
smiles and hugs me again
and says,
" Your eyes betray your body son,
they speak everything and
mine can read them perfectly."

N ow even i smile,
as i relax in her arms, now sure
of the fact that
IT'S ALL IN THE EYES ,
of every mother and son !!




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Illuminatus said...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 12:20 am:

THANX MAN .... U R DA 1ST ONE TO COMMENT ON IT .....

 

 
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shezaade said...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 12:19 am:

awesome... terrific... good going... keep it up. was a treat to read it..

 

 
sakina replied...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 5:39 am :
It's an awesome poem..And it has lots of emotions filled in ti..U r truely a very good writer...
 
Illuminatus replied...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 3:04 am :
hey thanx sakina .... i dint know that there were any more indians on teenink till now .... thanx for ur feedback, really appreciate it ...
 
sakina replied...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 7:24 am :
Always my pleasure..And neither did I think there were much Indians...But then again I thought of searching..So I went and checked in advance search...There I found out that there were many from India...
 
Zinaidia replied...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 3:27 am :
Very intriguing, I think poetry is what you are strongest at. Just work on grammar. Great job!
 
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