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May 7, 2011
By Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments

It's the sting of disappointment,
the warmth of rage,
spreads across your face,
it's like a brand,
like a warning,
and it can't be taken back.


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on Apr. 24 2014 at 11:15 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

Perfect and simple! Good job!

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on Jan. 26 2013 at 10:03 pm
CountryMusic, Dolores, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"The quietest people have the loudest minds."

Nice, I like how the title has a dot on either side, emphasizes the shortness. Blunt and well done :)

on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:30 am
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thank you so much!

on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:08 am
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
1 article 1 photo 250 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

Very strong, And very to the point. I love how emotional your poems get in only a few words or so. I love it. 5/5

on Jun. 12 2011 at 1:20 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thanks! I will.

on Jun. 11 2011 at 9:53 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

"Destinies Entwined" is in the poetry forum. 

on Jun. 11 2011 at 9:52 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

This poem is short but true, and it really hits home. The words you chose were wonderfully used. Good Job!

If you can please comment on my poem "Destinies Entwined" that would be great! 



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