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alone

May 6, 2011
By renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes, that girl who seems so strong, who never lets what people say bother her, who smiles and laughs with her friends all the time, is really the girl who, deep down, is falling to pieces.


Lost words
Hopeless sorrow
Cold evenings alone
Reaching for something
That’s out of your reach
You try so hard not to cry
But every tear stings your face
And leaves a mark
A mark of hate and sorrow
How you want to escape
But you’re just pulled back
By your fear
There’s nothing more you can do now
But sit by and watch it happen
As 1000 tears fall from your eyes
You don’t have freedom
You don’t have a choice
So every night you’ll sit there
Alone
And be tortured by the one you love
Because freedom seems so far away



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on Jun. 26 2011 at 11:49 am
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

You're very welcome!!!! :D

renni SILVER said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 11:51 am
renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
5 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes, that girl who seems so strong, who never lets what people say bother her, who smiles and laughs with her friends all the time, is really the girl who, deep down, is falling to pieces.

thank you :) so much

on Jun. 25 2011 at 10:49 am
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

That was amazing the words were so beautiful.  That was amazing!!!!! :))

renni SILVER said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 9:05 am
renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
5 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes, that girl who seems so strong, who never lets what people say bother her, who smiles and laughs with her friends all the time, is really the girl who, deep down, is falling to pieces.

i'm super glad you liked it =D and thank you :)

on Jun. 15 2011 at 7:46 am
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

Very powerful words! i absolutely love this one.


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