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Hushed Voices

Hushed voices speaking,
ever so sweetly,
In the back of my mind.
Your okay,
your okay.
The monster lingers,
in front of my face,
spitting words
they are never kind.
The monster's mouth moves,
hatred spews.
I draw back,
into the most,
recessive parts,
of my thoughts.
Where hushed voices,
my own voices,
sweetly whisper,
your okay,
I'm okay.



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dolphin13 said...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 7:40 am
I love it! Keep on writing!
 
NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 19, 2011 at 4:06 pm
I really liked this! The only thing that made it a bit hard to read was that "your" should've been "you're" a few times and there might've been a few extra commas at the end of lines. But regardless, this is a very good piece. :)
 
CaptainFabulous This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 29, 2011 at 9:37 pm

Oh wow you are right!!

Lol I almost never get that stuff messed up, thank you!

:D

 
xximjustmexx said...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 1:22 pm
Wow. I can totally relate. Very good. Please keep writing.
 
Piano_Phantom said...
Jun. 2, 2011 at 5:34 pm
The imagery was really cool. :)
 
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