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Live on

April 4, 2011
By Kitty.Meow.Daly SILVER, Clarksville, Tennessee
Kitty.Meow.Daly SILVER, Clarksville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Cowards die many times before their deaths, The valiant never taste of death but once." - Spakespeare
Life is pain, Highness. Anyone who tells you differently is selling something ~Wesley
Dare to move~ A Walk to Remember


I see the blood
Beautiful red blood
It runs it all directions
Spreading away from me.
I take a deep breath and
Close my eyes, seeing his beautiful face
He's so scared,
he holds my body trying
Oh, so hard to bring me back
Undo my doings.
I love him for it but i gave up
I whisper to him
" Live on...for both of us. "


The author's comments:
i wrote this when i was very depressed and would appreciated comments

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on Mar. 21 2012 at 7:04 pm
Kitty.Meow.Daly SILVER, Clarksville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Cowards die many times before their deaths, The valiant never taste of death but once." - Spakespeare
Life is pain, Highness. Anyone who tells you differently is selling something ~Wesley
Dare to move~ A Walk to Remember

It was supposed to be a little on the disturbed side. :) But thank you 

on Mar. 21 2012 at 6:58 pm
surfergirl98 PLATINUM, Roseville, CA, California
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Favorite Quote:
"never give up on something you couldn't go a day with out thinking about."
-myself

this is awesome.  little disturbing though. but i praise your work

 


on Mar. 21 2012 at 6:43 pm
Kitty.Meow.Daly SILVER, Clarksville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Cowards die many times before their deaths, The valiant never taste of death but once." - Spakespeare
Life is pain, Highness. Anyone who tells you differently is selling something ~Wesley
Dare to move~ A Walk to Remember

Thank you very much, I am doing a lot better since I wrote this :) a lot happier too :)

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on Mar. 21 2012 at 6:39 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

This is so sad!! It has a lot of emotion in it. I really like your personification.. nicely done! Hang in there!! :)

on Feb. 7 2012 at 5:38 pm
3mo_sw33ts SILVER, Gonzales, Louisiana
9 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but risk must be taken, because the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing at all."

I am crying!!! *sniff*

on Jan. 4 2012 at 4:14 pm
Kitty.Meow.Daly SILVER, Clarksville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Cowards die many times before their deaths, The valiant never taste of death but once." - Spakespeare
Life is pain, Highness. Anyone who tells you differently is selling something ~Wesley
Dare to move~ A Walk to Remember

Life gets rough but I'm making a clean start this year. thank you though :)

on Jan. 4 2012 at 4:08 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

Oh my gosh, this is so sad...:( I am so sorry you were this depressed but the poem is really good......its so sad :,(

on Nov. 28 2011 at 8:06 pm
BeautysBeast GOLD, Okinawa, Other
11 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
BETTER TO BE YOURSELF AND BE NOBODY THAN BE SOMEONE ELSE AND SOMEBODY ;)

beautifully sad