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It works every time.
Every day I stand in the lunch line.
I buy a lunch.
I throw it away.
Works every time.
Every day my food finds its way into my napkin.
Then to the trashcan.
Works every time.
I tell my friends I already ate.
I'm not hungry thank you.
Works every time.
Every day Mom makes me a snack.
I make eating sounds.
I hide the carefully prepared snack in my closet till garbage day.
Works every time.
Every day I lose a pound.
Works every time.
Every day I lose some hair.
Every day I feel sick.
Every day I see ugly.
Then I die.
Anorexia never works.
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Thank you ALL so much!!!
All critiques are appreciated!!
@silver.lotus- I agree, I was debating myself about the last phrase...what would you suggest changing?
@kashiena- I think so too :P which part would you change?
(saying specifics helos, so then I can revise :)
@kashiena- which parts? I agree, but in order to revise, specific areas would be lovely!
@silver.lotus- yeah, i was debating about the last sentence, (which is where the preachiness comes off).. what would you suggest?
@pianophantom- THANK YOU!!!
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