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Eye Lash

I LASH OUT.
the hurt is too great
it's just those eyes blinding my mind
I LASH OUT.
picture in my head
to block out the entire universe
he is all i see
with my mind blinded by cold eyes
I LASH OUT.
they stare at my life
always there
a vulture circling its prey
there to torture with
an undying stare
I LASH OUT.




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towritelove37 said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 10:11 pm:
very complex, but a great start! repetition is good, but maybe a bit overdone? great poem! keep writing! check out some of my poems?
 
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